My Career Writing

My career writing is about becoming a Forensic Scientist something i needed to improve on in my writing is vocabulary if a word is highlighted green it was changed to make more sence 

The paragraph i'm writing about is related jobs:

Similar jobs to becoming a Forensic Scientist is a research Scientist and a Health Care Scientist, They are both related to a forensic scientist as you do have to study really similar thing in high school and you have to have a Bachelors Degree in Science.