Thursday, 3 September 2015

Complex sentances

Walt: I can create complex sentances to make my writing more interesting.

Here is my introduction of its highlighted then it has a complex sentence:
Teachers should wear school uniform

Why should students have to wear a boring school uniform when teachers get to wear something nice and warm! Also why do they give us a lecture on why we should wear school uniform when they don't do it themselves, see my point?

My next step is to get a new writing goal.

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