Thursday, 2 July 2015

My writing goal

I did a writing prove it and i got marked extended abstract my writing goal is vocabulary.

here is some of my writing if a word is highlighted it means I have changed the word round to make it sound better:

The Kit-Kat yells at the biscuit 'go get me my towel.... NOW.' 'OKAY' says the biscuit sweetly. Obviously the Kit-Kat is nasty and the biscuit is a doormat.

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